【加隊】The furthest distance in the world--Alaska version

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The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between a flying bird and a swimming fish.
But when I call for your stepping forward,
Yet you are hesitating and not sure how to accomplish

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between my calling and your hesitating.
But when my dream comes closer and closer,
Yet you even not notice a possible frustrating.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between the reality of my dream and your disappointment.
But when I know the rejoiceful color of Alaska in Fall,
Yet you only could gaze at the pictures of my excitement.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between your speculation and my thrills.
But when a colorful leaf falls into an endless loneliness,
Yet I know how senseless it is without your smiles.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is not between the missing and the loneliness.
But where by the shore you live in meekness,
and the far north where Pacific ocean dashes.

The furthest distance in the world,
Is between you and me to stand side by side, 
while sharing and pondering on the amazing beauty,
Should your idleness not subside.

Above is how a lazy guy looks like! :)

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Thx. I am looking forward to your stepping forward and post some -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (57 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 12:38:53

Just to depict a lazy guy! Thx! -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 18:36:01

RC,你寫E詩的速度怎麽能這麽快。不要太有才氣,太浪漫好不好?:) -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (469 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 18:49:07

謝謝MF 可以賦予這段文字新的氣息! -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (78 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 19:32:23

嗯,好的。:) -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (43 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 19:36:15

Good point. Corrected already! -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 20:02:11

才思敏捷得迅雷不及掩耳,仰望。:) -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 beautifulwind 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 21:46:09

很應景別致。四句一段,壓二四句為多,節奏句長有什麽講究嗎? -淘金客- 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/04/2013 postreply 21:29:30

the main purpose is 應景別致, -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (159 bytes) () 02/05/2013 postreply 07:31:11

我問你變成你問我?不能以問題回答問題。:)) -淘金客- 給 淘金客 發送悄悄話 淘金客 的博客首頁 (227 bytes) () 02/05/2013 postreply 08:25:04

心得談不上,得用心 要有真情。共勉。 -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 10:01:23

深情真摯的好詩。 -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 09:40:53

謝謝Becca -rockcurrent- 給 rockcurrent 發送悄悄話 rockcurrent 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 10:57:15

Ding -hammerheadshark- 給 hammerheadshark 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 21:46:59

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