老逸，鬥膽改一改你的英語，改錯了不要見怪，大家切磋，共同提高。

老逸原句：if you can get access to their books, can you just post a very small part of each. When I read all, I will give you a definite answer as to their writing of English.  thanks.

改句：If you have access to their books, can you post just a very small part of each? Once done reading, I will give you an answer about their English.

理由：

1.  if you can get access to their books是to get books跟to have access的混用。要get的不是access，是books. 有access，那就貼上來。

2. just用錯了地方，這是中國人容易犯的錯。

3. When I read all：不妥，要麽when I read them all，要麽when I read it all, 但前麵是單數each，不太好處理，故此改。

4. I will give you a definite answer as to their writing of English：as to 不妥，它一般用在句子前麵。