Sorry, #10 still does not sound right

來源: 於 2012-04-08 05:50:04 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

10. On the way walking toward my dining room for some water something almost tripped me => On my way to dining room for some water, something almost tripped me.

* It should be "On my way to dining room for some water, I was almost tripped by something."

Now, I feel better. I can't replace an error with an error, can I?