Excellent! a rare combination of advanced reading and writing！

Hilarious and entertaining! I laughed out loud at the end.Did you miss the part: Mama called the doctor and the doctor said, no more monkeys jumping on the bed. haha.

有一兩處我覺得該有the： Rest of (the) stops,  around (the) corner, I chose (the) larger number

an incredibly long name with a few vowels是不是用few vowels更確切？因為我覺得你想說是元音少？