My comments: (Good work)

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1. alike - like

2. If people do not wear clothing, they will be naked and will be mocked, and these will cause moral corruption.   (加個連接詞)

3.conflictions - conflicts

4. If the socity is (were) a train, etiquette (would be) just likes the rails;

這句話和下句話要用虛擬語氣。

5. typo: parters - partners