一點兒自己的correction：

來源: 於 2011-06-26 12:08:31 [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

That's why I proposed to use your writing as "磚模" for us to practice and learn.-->for us to practice writing and learn from the process.

it wouldn't be anyone else' business--> else's