謝謝！您太自信了，請看。。。。。。

他們的：
A Song of the Palace.

Her tears are spent, but no dreams come.
She can hear the others singing through the night.
She has lost his love. Alone with her beauty,
She leans till dawn on her incense-pillow.

我的：
A SONG OF THE PALACE

Her tears are spent, but no dreams come，
She can hear the others singing through the night。
She has lost his love alone with her beauty，
She awake till morning with the incense-burner alone。

我7歲在美國的中文學校學中文，學校老師教我們唐詩英文的意思。