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"just got a phone interview and have an on site interview next we hope I am luck this time!"

正確的應該：(在不改變她的原意的情況下)
Just got a phone interview and (I) will have an on-site interview next week. Hopefully, I would be lucky this time!

原句兩處語法錯誤， 一個錯誤的賓表結構， 一處錯字。 改後的語法雖然OK， 但是仍然不好， 不像一個MBA說出的話。