1) 把你寫的放到MSWord裏去檢查拚寫和語法錯誤。2)第一段不用寫。
3)你出庭是為什麽?
如果是我,估計就這麽幾句:
Your Honor,
It was snowing. I was on a slope. I drove very slow and carefully. Still, when I tried to break, it failed. Considering I did not have any previous traffic violation, please waive the fine and dismiss the ticket.
Thank you, Sir.
