9歲孩子的作文

來源: tax2 2019-02-09 13:07:04 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (1685 bytes)

How could you improve rakes?
To improve rakes I would first build something that was like a car. Then I would stick rakes onto the front of the car. This way, if you are driving it will rake leaves too! Another way to improve rakes are rake gloves, you would put them on your hands to take things! Another way to improve rakes is to add more prongs to it. That way you could rakes more leaves! Another way to improve rakes is to use TWO of them! Ever think of that? Yet another way to improve rakes is to make a robot to rake for you!(that invention is for LAZY people by the way!) Another way to improve rakes is to make a mini rakes . This might not help you but hey! at least it is cute! Another way to improve rakes is not to rake! That way the leaves will slowly decompose throughout time! It'll help nature! hey it is good for oral hygiene. Another way to improve rakes is to give he prongs to the outside of a jacket! That way when you roll around in the leaves you will also be taking them. Another way to improve rakes is to make a liquid that you pour into the grass wait a few days and Voila! It's like magic! All of the leaves disappeared! Another way to improve rakes is just BURN them! wOW ! SOooo 
Simple! Another way to improve rakes is to trim all leaves! That way you won't need to rake them!Brilliant ! Another way to improve rakes is to eat all leaves! That could be our new traditional thanksgiving feast! Leaves! Mint leaves!lettuces! Parsley!spinach! mmmmmm! Leaves!Another way to improve rakes is to use leaves to make clothes! I can see it now ! Leavayet! A trendy new clothes line with all new leaf clothing! WOW!

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付原文 -tax2- 給 tax2 發送悄悄話 (87 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 13:08:24

wow,密密麻麻的,好。 -幾句閑話- 給 幾句閑話 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 21:02:18

just use plastic tree!! No need to write anything!! -tennisluv- 給 tennisluv 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 14:56:56

一看就像是隨手寫的,裏麵typo,文法錯誤都有,並且最後的都不對題了,不過美國老師很懶,一般會說great! -rancho2008- 給 rancho2008 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 15:21:37

沒有,老師都沒批改,就是瞎寫的,是creative writing.老師經常說 -tax2- 給 tax2 發送悄悄話 (71 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 15:40:14

孺子可教!讚 -OneManArmy- 給 OneManArmy 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 15:37:23

-tax2- 給 tax2 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 02/09/2019 postreply 15:41:15

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