great post but..

來源: Kaolin007 於 2010-04-06 08:07:13 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀： 次 (272 bytes)
"would dare post" should be "would dare TO post"

"some narcissistic showoff insist " should be ".....insists"

"In the unfortunate event" better with "In an unfortunate event"

" Long live Mr. Zha!" should be " Long lives Mr. Zha!

所有跟帖： 

• 班門弄斧? -diaozhi- ♀ 給 diaozhi 發送悄悄話 (217 bytes) () 04/06/2010 postreply 09:12:01

• 回複：班門弄斧? -Kaolin007- ♂ 給 Kaolin007 發送悄悄話 (385 bytes) () 04/06/2010 postreply 09:23:52

• I am smiling; hence, this reply - -diaozhi- ♀ 給 diaozhi 發送悄悄話 (888 bytes) () 04/06/2010 postreply 10:15:28

• after reading your reply here and below, I can only conclude -Kaolin007- ♂ 給 Kaolin007 發送悄悄話 (204 bytes) () 04/06/2010 postreply 10:35:48

請您先登陸，再發跟帖！