我認為這是你至今寫得最好的，少了無聊的繚繞和滯漲的墨團，多了清浙的筆觸，如果能在轉折處更方硬些會更好。

來源: columbia 於 2015-05-10 10:02:56 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀：次

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