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《The Naked Thinker 赤裸的思考者》

(2024-12-23 21:53:13) 下一個

The Naked Thinker

After one-hour brisk walk outside
Sweating
Back to inside
Clothes off
Naked
Sit on the white toilet
Black long hair on her smooth shoulders
Eyes closed
Hands holding her rosy cheeks and chin
Elbows on her laps
Enjoying the moment and
Thinking
What if all humans no longer need to wear clothes?

赤裸的思考者

在室外快步走了一個小時後
冒著汗
回到室內
脫掉衣服
赤裸著
坐在白色馬桶上
黑色長發披在光滑的肩膀上
雙眼閉著
雙手托著紅潤的臉頰和下巴
雙肘支撐在膝部上
一邊享受著這一刻
一邊思考
如果所有人都不再需要穿衣服會是什麽樣?

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CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 'BeijingGirl1' 的評論 :謝謝京妞的節日祝福,也同祝你聖誕平安喜樂!歲月靜好,平平淡淡才是真 :)

BeijingGirl1 回複 悄悄話 祝小西節日平安喜樂。 很久沒看到你了。 祝詩歌上首頁。
CBA7 回複 悄悄話 這首詩於2024年12月23日被選上了Allpoetry的首頁(Front Page Picks, FPP)。
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CBA7 回複 悄悄話 Comments from Allpoetry:

Shards of a soul - I do often think how nice it would be to not have to wear clothes, I think it would give some sense of freedom. Love the idea!

Politepotato77 - Lighthearted and humorous I think it's refreshing to find hidden gems such as this. Lovely. Amazing

Toffee Coffee - Nicely penned, good choice in words, good rhythm flow. Great job all together.

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