:::【我想要】--參考影雲譯稿

【我想要】

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讓你握住
我的筆
書寫一行
橫貫東西的讚美
:但願:
靈感
永不枯竭
...


夏季的風
低語
尋找著
失去音訊的
老友
...
盡管海水
會在瞬間
洗去
沙灘上的足跡
...
我想要
將文字
裝進你的槍膛
瞄準
那個脆弱的
心腸
!
渴望
與愛
卻如此
美麗倔強
！
哦
沉默大地上的
流星
我想要
在你流火的
羽翅上
唱一首
人性
之
歌
!
!
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作舟

[未夕]

謝謝各位！Enjoy the World Cup!

我一記勁射， 連人帶球應聲入網！ 狂喜， 歡呼， 爽！
。。。。。。
等一等 。。。什仫？進的是自己的大門？

[~&~]

Mermaid: "...but I wish Germany could win the cup... a dream... hope it come to true)))!!!"

Really??

I like French team too....

Have fun watching the game!!!!

[~&~]

我想要
將生命
傳進你的心髒
射向
那個嚴防的
白網
!
:))

very creative, wx!!!!
happy World Cup!!! make sure to take naps during the day :)
cheers!!!

[地中海人魚]

wooow, again touched by this beautiful poem! also like wei xi's version a lot! interesting!

I am now watching the game between France and switzland. French team is always my favourate, but I wish Germany could win the cup... a dream... hope it come to true)))!!!

[y.y.]

hahahaha, wx's re-engineered piece is full of fun !!!


:)

[未夕]

很流暢，謝謝！問好！

re-engineering 一下，

【我想要】
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讓你隨著
我的腳
揮灑一弧
飛越中場的悠揚
:但願:
激情
永不枯竭
...
夏季的風
迷茫
尋找著
失去蹤跡的
足球
...
盡管敵隊
會在瞬間
破壞
不止息的衝擊
...
我想要
將生命
傳進你的心髒
射向
那個嚴防的
白網
!
渴望
與愛
卻如此
癡醉頑強
！
哦
沸騰巨蛋裏的
草場
我想要
在你墨綠的
曠野上
吼一首
青春
之
歌

[y.y.]

yes! me too when i was reading the lyrical voice of Czecholslovakia . . . there, poetry is regarded as a normal, everyday activity . . .poets' names are household words. . . ! how beautifully art is interwined into life! - - -poetism . . .

[作舟詩集]

do "Americans" still read poetry???

:))

some years ago, i was surprised [but not surprised] to learn that poetry is still in every fibre of Iranian culture....people speak with poetic language, talk about poets/poetry in households, teahouses, etc....

[y.y.]

should be.

latin america has so many great poets as well as soccer players. . .

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funny thing is that "perhaps fifty times as many as books of poetry are bought by Czechs as by Americans."

[作舟詩集]

thanx to your version as well!!!

cheers!!!

[Cheers to Mexican Team too!!!]

---hope there are some soccer fans who also read poetry :)

[y.y.]

非常喜愛你的翻譯！美！