How I Started a Snowman
by: Alexander Li
When I was making a snowman, I didn’t know what to do. But then I had an idea. I was making the head. But then I give up because I couldn’t get it out and then my mom said to come in. But I didn’t because I weren’t jealous about building a snowman. So then I came in because my mom told me to (then again).
Tomorrow I started a snowman with my sister and dad. I still didn’t know what to do but then I saw my dad roll a ball. I asked if I could do it and my dad said yes. So I helped him do it. But my sister wanted to do the head because I already helped my dad. But then we needed a carrot so I went inside to ask mom for a carrot and she gave me one.
I came back outside and the snowman was finished! Instead of coal it was twigs. But no arms. I can’t get a branch a pull it off because it needs to grow.
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不少拚寫和文法錯誤。他願意寫我就高興了。
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