Could it be a little more poetic?

On a rainy day

Drizzle washes away your desolation

Breathe calmly

Writing to the one you are falling with

People say Love is like

A delicate exotic fruit;

Touch it

And the bloom is gone

But they have not seen

The apparent interest of theirs’

In passion is complete pseudo

Grief ages us

If we do not believe in Love

No matter what happens

We believe in it

Even, till the very end

I can still smell

Your refreshing fragrant hair

When your soul

Like silent wings of an angel

Come shining through

It makes loving you

More than a dream comes true

Dance through waves of passion

All cross oceans

For a moment in time

I could feel I am free

There are waves of forgiveness and regret

And the first wave of true love

I will never forget

Lift your eyes and see the truth

Hold you in my arm and tonight, we see skies