Sharpcheddar
Agirlonaladder
inatorchreddress
reachesforacubeofsharpcheddar
thatsitsontopofasmellymess
inahushedattic
whichoftenradiatesstatic
Thedomeskylightsharpensthemoonlight
themoonlightthat'sneitherchromaticnoremphatic
Thesharpenedmoonlightblindsthegirls'eyes
andplacesaquiveringmouseinthespotlight
GPT
Thepoem"SharpCheddar"evokesa...[閱讀全文]
蟬音了了
詩歌和蟬鳴
博文
(2023-06-22 16:46:23)
(2023-06-22 07:29:24)
Sand'srollingonyourbody,warm
Sand'srollingonyourbody,warm
Darkclouds'pressingthesky,firm
Onthisdesertedbeach
wearesharingoneripepeach
Flowingandburningbetweenourlipsisitsjuice
Floodedbyheatandsweet
weprayforraintodilute
Heedingourwishcomesthethunderstorm
Racingareraindropstorescueourlipsinswarm 這是最近寫的，貼在一個英文詩歌的網站，一位讀者留言，讓...[閱讀全文]
Darkclouds'pressingthesky,firm
Onthisdesertedbeach
wearesharingoneripepeach
Flowingandburningbetweenourlipsisitsjuice
Floodedbyheatandsweet
weprayforraintodilute
Heedingourwishcomesthethunderstorm
Racingareraindropstorescueourlipsinswarm 這是最近寫的，貼在一個英文詩歌的網站，一位讀者留言，讓...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-21 07:32:10)
WhenwindbendslightWhenwindbendslight
Iseeyourface
floating
yourhair
waving
tillmyhandsreachouttoyou
ItouchonlythewrinklesoflightGPT
Thisshortpoemcapturesadelicateandetherealmoment,wheretheinterplayofwindandlightevokesavividimageofthespeakerperceivingsomeone'sface.Therepetitionofthefirsttwolines,"Whenwindbendslight,"emphasizesthecentralthemeandsetsthetonefo...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-20 10:23:06)
孤陋寡聞的我才看了Coenbrothers的TheBalladofBusterScruggs，驚為神作，尤其喜歡第三個，MealTicket，以為通過影音傳遞思索做到了極致，每一幀畫麵，每一個麵部表情都值得反複品味，艱難的取舍，為了飯票，選擇會算數的雞還是缺了四肢的人。
通常我不認同爛柿子的打分，但是很同意它給這部電影的打分和點評。
TheBalladofBusterScruggs-RottenTomatoes
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(2023-06-20 08:12:24)
OneloosebrickOneloosebrick
theonlyloosebrick
incognito
inmind'sshadow
hidesinabrickwall
thewallthatblockslight
andtrapspeopleAstimeticks
theloosebrickstillwaitsforthefirstclick
bythepeoplewhoseeyesaremacro
buthollow
bythepeoplewhoappeartall
butcrawlGPT
Thepoemtitled"OneLooseBrick"exploresthethemeofindividuality,oppression,andthepotentia...[閱讀全文]
theonlyloosebrick
incognito
inmind'sshadow
hidesinabrickwall
thewallthatblockslight
andtrapspeopleAstimeticks
theloosebrickstillwaitsforthefirstclick
bythepeoplewhoseeyesaremacro
buthollow
bythepeoplewhoappeartall
butcrawlGPT
Thepoemtitled"OneLooseBrick"exploresthethemeofindividuality,oppression,andthepotentia...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-19 08:12:17)
TwilightandShadows
Rightbeforesunrise
creaturesarebathedintwilight
free
notyetpulledbytheirshadowsCreaturesareshoweredbythesun
draggingtheirshadowsandwanderingRightaftersunset
creaturesarebathedintwilight
free
nolongerpulledbytheirshadowsGPT
Thepoemcapturesthethemesoftransition,freedom,andtheinterplaybetweenlightanddarkness.Itconsistsofthreestanzas,eachdesc...[閱讀全文]
Rightbeforesunrise
creaturesarebathedintwilight
free
notyetpulledbytheirshadowsCreaturesareshoweredbythesun
draggingtheirshadowsandwanderingRightaftersunset
creaturesarebathedintwilight
free
nolongerpulledbytheirshadowsGPT
Thepoemcapturesthethemesoftransition,freedom,andtheinterplaybetweenlightanddarkness.Itconsistsofthreestanzas,eachdesc...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-18 17:17:32)
MoonandTide
Inyoureyesshoneafullmoon
Inmyheartroseahightide
Beyondabeachinmaroon
wesailedtoanisland’scurbside
Youdreamtarainbow
yousaid,hungoverthehorizon’swindow
Iwasblindedbymoonlight
Isaid,onastarlesssilentnight
Sunroseandtidefell
Couldyoukindlytell
WhereIwaslastnight GPT
"MoonandTide"isashortpoemthatevokesthemesoflove,long...[閱讀全文]
Inmyheartroseahightide
Beyondabeachinmaroon
wesailedtoanisland’scurbside
Youdreamtarainbow
yousaid,hungoverthehorizon’swindow
Iwasblindedbymoonlight
Isaid,onastarlesssilentnight
Sunroseandtidefell
Couldyoukindlytell
WhereIwaslastnight GPT
"MoonandTide"isashortpoemthatevokesthemesoflove,long...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-17 15:29:29)
Dream
Inagallery
nexttoaviolinlyingonthefloor
I'mwaitingforyou
Yourshadow’slong
Yourfaceissilhouettedonthestrings
butyourfootleversthedoorajar
Amanrepeatedlyasksbymyears
whereyouare
Myanswer
She’swaitingforyou GPT
Thepoemtitled"Dream"isabrief,enigmaticpiecethatcapturesasenseofanticipationandmystery.Let'sdelveintothean...[閱讀全文]
Inagallery
nexttoaviolinlyingonthefloor
I'mwaitingforyou
Yourshadow’slong
Yourfaceissilhouettedonthestrings
butyourfootleversthedoorajar
Amanrepeatedlyasksbymyears
whereyouare
Myanswer
She’swaitingforyou GPT
Thepoemtitled"Dream"isabrief,enigmaticpiecethatcapturesasenseofanticipationandmystery.Let'sdelveintothean...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-16 09:08:37)
LightinyourshadowWhoweavesthelightproofcurtain
Whoraisesthebogusneonsun
Whoquenchestheburningbeacon
Whotwistseveryone’stongue
Peoplemurmurthesequestions
Noonedareexhaleanswersfromtheirlungs
Tillintheairripplesyourwhisper
Echoingyouranswersandlastbreath
Tillintheairwavesyourfever
Flamingyouranswersandlastbreath
Peoplereachoutforyourhands
Onlytouchyo...[閱讀全文]
Whoraisesthebogusneonsun
Whoquenchestheburningbeacon
Whotwistseveryone’stongue
Peoplemurmurthesequestions
Noonedareexhaleanswersfromtheirlungs
Tillintheairripplesyourwhisper
Echoingyouranswersandlastbreath
Tillintheairwavesyourfever
Flamingyouranswersandlastbreath
Peoplereachoutforyourhands
Onlytouchyo...[閱讀全文]
(2023-06-15 09:03:34)
Nighttrain
Itdrizzlesatmidnightinspring
Raindropstap,tap
awakenthedozingnighttrain
Theagedandworngreencarswobble
thewanderingwoodenbenches
andmyfewthreadsofsilverhairs
thatroamandblurindimlight Onestopafteranother
surgeonbandsofteens
Ilookforscarlet
inthecrowd
forthefirstspreadofscarletonyourlips
inmymemory Dreamafterdream
thenighttrainhorns...[閱讀全文]
Raindropstap,tap
awakenthedozingnighttrain
Theagedandworngreencarswobble
thewanderingwoodenbenches
andmyfewthreadsofsilverhairs
thatroamandblurindimlight Onestopafteranother
surgeonbandsofteens
Ilookforscarlet
inthecrowd
forthefirstspreadofscarletonyourlips
inmymemory Dreamafterdream
thenighttrainhorns...[閱讀全文]
