詩友的詩思非常好,稍微注意一下平仄韻律,當必有精進。
答常春藤詩友:一枚紅葉作詩緣,妙想奇思體自然。 莫道秋風凋萬物,常春藤下舞翩翩。
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• 哈哈哈,收獲了這麽多好詩,俺高興的手舞足蹈呢:) -常春藤88- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2021 postreply 09:10:44
• 哈哈哈,收獲了這麽多好詩,俺高興的手舞足蹈呢:) -常春藤88- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2021 postreply 09:10:44
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