Thanks for sharing

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回答: "A Backward Glance" by Mrs. Edith Wharton 由 autumnjune 於 2018-01-13 15:26:00

It is informative and of readability. At least I have known of Edith after reading the passages. I am afraid too many adverbs were used in your writing. It won’t hurt to omit some of them:)

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